Tuesday, 28 December 2010

Progress Report 7 March 12 -13 two students

Write down your version of Progress Report 2 in correct English. Click on "commentaires" to do so. Don't forget to sign your writing at the end.

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  1. I don't have to write PROGRESS REPORT on top every day just when I start a new batch after Prof Nemur takes the old ones away. I just have to put the date on top. It's a good idea. I can sit up in bed and look out the window at the grass and trees outside. The skinny nurse's name is Hilda and she's very good too me. She brings me things to eat and she fixes my bed and she says I was a very brave man to let them do things to my head. She says she would never let them do things to her brains for all the tea in China. I told her it wasn't for tea in China. It was to make me smart. And she said maybe they got no right to make me smart because if god wanted me to be smart he would have made me born that way. And what about Adam and Eve and the sin with the tree of knowledge and eating the apple and the fall. And maybe Prof Nemur and Dr Strauss was tempering with things they got no write to with.
    She's very skinny and when she talks her face gets all red. She says maybe I better prey to god to ask him to forgive what they have done to me. I didn't eat no apples or do nothing sinful. And now I'm scared. Maybe I shouldn't have let them operate on my brain like she said if it's against god.I don't want to make god angry.
    Christopher and Nicolas

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  2. March 12
    I don't have to write PROGRESS REPORT on top every day just when I start a new batch after Prof Nemur takes the old ones away. I just have to put the date on top. It's a good idea. I can sit up in bed and look out the window at the grass and trees outside. The skinny nurse's name is Hilda and she's very good too me. She brings me things to eat and she fixes my bed and she says I was a very brave man to let them do things to my head. She says she would never let them do things to her brains for all the tea in China. I told her it wasn't for tea in China. It was to make me smart. And she said maybe they got no right to make me smart because if god wanted me to be smart he would have made me born that way. And what about Adam and Eve and the sin with the tree of knowledge and eating the apple and the fall. And maybe Prof Nemur and Dr Strauss was were t(e)ampering with things they got no (write) right to with. She's very skinny and when she talks her face gets all red. She says maybe I ‘d better (prey) pray to god to ask him to forgive what they have done to me. I didn't eat any (no) apples or do nothing sinful. And now I'm scared. Maybe I shouldn't have let them operate on my brain like she said if it's against God. I don't want to make god angry. well done

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