Write down your version of Progress Report 4 p.7 (from "well do you ...") to p.8 in correct English. Click on "commentaires" to do so. Don't forget to sign your writing at the end.
Well do you know he put Algernon in a box like a big table with a lot of twists and turns like all kinds of walls and a start and a finish like the paper had. Only their was a screen over the big table. And Burt took out his clock and lifted up a sledding door and said let's go Algernon and the mouse sniffed 2 or 3 times and started to run. First he ran down one long row and then when he saw he couldn't go no more he came back where he started from and he just stood there a minute wiggling his whiskers. Then he went off in the other direction and started to run again. It was just like he was doing the same thing Burt wanted me to do with the lines on the paper. I was laughing because I thought it was going a hard thing for a mouse to do. But then Algernon kept going all the way threw that thing all the right ways till he came out where it said finish and he mad a squeak. Burt says that means he was happy because he did the thing right. Boy I said that smart mouse Burt said would you like to race against Algernon. I said sure and he said he had a different kind of amaze made of wood with rows scratched in it and an electric stick like a pencil. And he could fix up Algernon's amaze to be the same like that one so we could both be doing the same kind.
Well do you know he put Algernon in a box like a big table with a lot of twists and turns like all kinds of walls and a start and a finish like the paper had. Only their there was a screen over the big table. And Burt took out his clock and lifted up a (sledding) sliding door and said “let's go Algernon” and the mouse sniffed 2 or 3 times and started to run. First he ran down one long row and then when he saw he couldn't go no more he came back where he started from and he just stood there a minute wiggling his whiskers. Then he went off in the other direction and started to run again. It was just like he was doing the same thing Burt wanted me to do with the lines on the paper. I was laughing because I thought it was going to be a hard thing for a mouse to do. But then Algernon kept going all the way (threw) through that thing all the right ways till he came out where it said finish and he made a squeak. Burt says that means he was happy because he did the thing right. Boy I said that’s a smart mouse Burt said Would you like to race against Algernon? I said sure and he said he had a different kind of (a)maze made of wood with rows scratched in it and an electric stick like a pencil. And he could fix up Algernon's maze to be the same like that one so we could both be doing the same kind. well done
Well do you know he put Algernon in a box like a big table with a lot of twists and turns like all kinds of walls and a start and a finish like the paper had. Only their was a screen over the big table. And Burt took out his clock and lifted up a sledding door and said let's go Algernon and the mouse sniffed 2 or 3 times and started to run. First he ran down one long row and then when he saw he couldn't go no more he came back where he started from and he just stood there a minute wiggling his whiskers. Then he went off in the other direction and started to run again.
ReplyDeleteIt was just like he was doing the same thing Burt wanted me to do with the lines on the paper. I was laughing because I thought it was going a hard thing for a mouse to do. But then Algernon kept going all the way threw that thing all the right ways till he came out where it said finish and he mad a squeak. Burt says that means he was happy because he did the thing right.
Boy I said that smart mouse Burt said would you like to race against Algernon. I said sure and he said he had a different kind of amaze made of wood with rows scratched in it and an electric stick like a pencil. And he could fix up Algernon's amaze to be the same like that one so we could both be doing the same kind.
Lucie and Jeremy
Well do you know he put Algernon in a box like a big table with a lot of twists and turns like all kinds of walls and a start and a finish like the paper had. Only their there was a screen over the big table. And Burt took out his clock and lifted up a (sledding) sliding door and said “let's go Algernon” and the mouse sniffed 2 or 3 times and started to run. First he ran down one long row and then when he saw he couldn't go no more he came back where he started from and he just stood there a minute wiggling his whiskers. Then he went off in the other direction and started to run again. It was just like he was doing the same thing Burt wanted me to do with the lines on the paper. I was laughing because I thought it was going to be a hard thing for a mouse to do. But then Algernon kept going all the way (threw) through that thing all the right ways till he came out where it said finish and he made a squeak. Burt says that means he was happy because he did the thing right. Boy I said that’s a smart mouse Burt said Would you like to race against Algernon? I said sure and he said he had a different kind of (a)maze made of wood with rows scratched in it and an electric stick like a pencil. And he could fix up Algernon's maze to be the same like that one so we could both be doing the same kind. well done
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