Tuesday, 28 December 2010

Progress Report 1 one student

Write down your version of Progress Report 1 in correct English. Click on "commentaires" to do so. Don't forget to sign your writing at the end.

3 comments:

  1. Dr strauss says I should write down what I think and remember and every thing that happens to me from now on.
    I don't know why but he says it's important so they will see if they can use me. I hope they use me because Miss Kinnian says maybe they can make me smart. I want to be smart. My name is Charlie Gordno I work in Donner bakery where Mr Donner gives me 11 dollars a week and bred or cake if I want. I'm 32 years old and professor Nemur I can't write goodbut he says it doesn't matter says I should write just like I talk and like I write competition in Miss Kinnians class at the Bekman colledge center for retarted adults where I go to learn 3 times a week ob my time off. Dr. Strauss says to write a lot everythink I think and everythnk that happins to mw but i can't think anymore because I don't have think to write so I will close for today.. yours truly Charlie Gordon
    Mehdi Khelifa

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  2. Dr Strauss says I should write down what i think and remember and every thing that happens to me from now on.
    I don't know why but he says its important so they will see if they can use me. i hope they use me because Miss Kinnian says maybe they can make me smart. I want to be smart. My name is Charlie Gordon I work in Donners bakery where Mr Donner gives me 11 dollars a week and bread or cake if I want. I am 32 years old and next month is my birthday. I told dr Strauss and professor Nemur I can't write good but he says
    it don't matter he says i should write just like I talk and like I write composition in Miss Kinnians class at the Beekmin college center for retarted adults where I go to learn 3 times a week on my time off. Dr. Strauss says to write a lot everything I think and everything that happens to me but I can't think anymore because I have nothing to write so I will close for today... yours truly Charlie Gordon.
    Marina

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  3. Dr Strauss says I should write down what (i) I think and remember (and) every thing that happens to me from now on. I don't know why but he says it’s important so they will see if they can use me. i hope they use me because Miss Kinnian says maybe they can make me smart. I want to be smart. My name is Charlie Gordon I work in Donners bakery where Mr Donner gives me 11 dollars a week and bread or cake if I want. I am 32 years old and next month is my birthday. I told Dr Strauss and professor Nemur I can't write (good) well but he says it (don't) doesn’t matter he says I should write just like I talk and like I write composition in Miss Kinnians’ class at the Beekman college center for retarted adults where I go to learn 3 times a week on my time off. Dr. Strauss says to write a lot everything I think and everything that happens to me but I can't think anymore because I have nothing to write so I will close for today... yours truly Charlie Gordon. Marina Mehdi well done

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